Lord_Morpheus

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im enjoying it so far, nothing to complain about! keep up the good work author :) ... apparently these reviews have a minimum letter requirement so im going to ramble on a little with fancy words and cascading turns of frase. did you know that when the opportunity rover went offline the last message they sent it was a song?

Heyy nice to see a new chapter to this story! Looking forward to seeing what Marceline gets up to in the mortal world.

The main character getting some miles of their soul before they meet the main cast, we love to see it. Nice to see that the MC was living a full/interesting life building his kingdom rather than just being unchanging while they wait for cannon to start.

In that case, good job. I guess the confusion came from me not knowing if what i was picking up was intentional or not. Nice to hear that their going to grow and change as time moves forward.

I love adventure time as a setting, im definitely going to be reading this for as long as you keep ot going :) If i had to offer criticism, im having a hard time getting a read on the main characters personality to be honest. He's kinda coming off as goofy but in a childish way rather than it being a joke or a choice? I don't know if that's what you were going for or not.

Thanks for the new story! I always love your stuff. Adventure Time doesn't have enough good fics for how awesome the source material is so its nice to see something promising and Marceline is one of my favorite characters to boot!

Wicked story you made here. Thanks for sharing it with me.