World_Failure

Author I know this is your story but can you explain why Zhou ziyun was so bossy like she literally has no respect for him as a master, i know she respects him but why se was so bossy.

ok

Xiao Wu plot is important for future chapters and there is a reason I want Xiaowu to feel desperate for tang to meet Xiaowu's mother

Because daimubai checked his age with his spirit power and tang san sensed that but he didn't stop him to check his spirit power and check his body so this is the reason daimubai knew he was 12 years old.If you have any doubt then comment Thankyou 😊

some minor mistakes sorry 😞

First thing is, this is my first novel fan fic so I don't have any experience with plot work so, I am sorry for your disappointment

Ok, I try to work on the Villainous nature of MC

He wanted every lucky encounter to become the strongest supreme god king, he wants to become invincible in all universes, also in the mortal world he wants the best of the best spirit ring in all of his martial soul So, seeing daydream million year mental type beast he lost his emotions in excitement for some time.

if i want I can, tang san level up to 48 something but the plot have to become small and something 120 chapters complete this novel. I am trying to create new continents and holy lands so i have to compromise his level updating, but don't worry his battle power going to be overpowered.

Sorry readers i forgot because of new lands, continents, spirit beasts and rings for tang san journey I almost forgot about tang hao next time I focus on all minor and major plots.