Hyroster

Is good, don't feel discouraged by the comments. They are people who have such sad lives that they have to imagine that they are the MC of the story to make themselves feel better. If you are not that type of reader, give it a try. The supposed cheating is not something out of this world.

🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁 🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁 I hope you update your Smartphone story regularly too. 🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁

Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.

Ok let me tell you the joke that you overlooked. As you know that the chapters are very short in this novel but that bro said that chapters are very long in a sense of sarcasm towards author who is making chapters very short . Then you came saying chapter are already short taking that person's comments in opinion. But You couldn't understood that he was also saying chapters were very short hence you not understanding the underlying sarcasm so that's why I said that sarcasm wasn't you strong suite. Thats all . No Harm Meant To You. 😉 Hope you now understood it 😅.

Don't bother with this idiot author as someone who has read your book "throne of nothingness" i know you are clearly better at taking critics than like this one who doesn't even wanna hear. By the way I loved your book "TON" and have high expectations from your new book 😉.

Pretty good start and most categories of writing are decent, the only issue I have is when the MC becomes handsome and by that I mean so much so that after about the 4th chapter every other chapter is about how handsome he is or how much girls blush when they stare at him. I have nothing against handsomeness but it adds no substance when its mentioned for 9 chapters straight with no development or regular usage of the actual chat group

I can see that sarcasm is not your strong suite .

Giving it a five, could use some improvements in the writing, but still miles better than most fanfics on here, hope you keep going……………………….. (need the review to be 14 characters)zzhdhdbsudbbdbdbdbdbhdhdbdbbdbfbhdhr

I haven't read it but I like the idea and plan to give it a try . I don't care about people saying mc got superman power but act like homelander. I mean just because he got superman powers doesn't necessarily mean he also got his personality and let's be honest if i got Superman powers world be damned i'mma act and do whatever i want through not necessarily harm innocent. But I will be free in true sense.

TF.. it would take him 1 BILLION scientific points for 10th level .