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Natasha is right to be honest the MC does act like a kid with too much power.
The story started great, was going good until the Battle of New York, I've started to hate these kinds of novels where they act like spoiled brat with power and humiliate Avangers, which I've mostly just read in Chinese novels. I still kept reading and then he just changed the world and went to another world all together.
has it already been rewritten? Is it still readable or like the plot itself changes so it's just better to wait?
Looking good so far, waiting for updates.
Sure, I'll give them a try.
I had came here after reading on Scribblehub that you're shifting here... 🥲
I really like the book so far, I love Summoning type books so that's a factor too but it's great writing and the characters are also quite interesting. The only complaint I've with the book is about fights being too long, sometimes lasting 6-7 chapters or more which can make me lose interest sometimes. But the fights are written decently enough that this issue can be ignored mostly, for other people at least. Definitely loving the book, keep including different mythologies, waiting for other beasts such as Hecatoncheires, Serpopard etc. As for others he should suggest the Titans and Giants from greek mythology like Chronos, Atlas or Norse mythology also has beings like Ymir and Surtr or even Odin, Vili, and Ve.
I really want to read this, I love Dungeon Master/Summoner kind of novels but damn 10 chapters stright and absolutely no story at all. Worldbuilding should be done by story Devlopment not by info dumping. Author should have done it like this. Story starts, 30 days pass away and as story progresses the narrative will move back to the past to explain how it was done, or maybe the characters can talk and you find out from their talk about the whole empires and stuff, you can do a lot but it just feels dull from the first 10 chapters.
An adult (mentally) dating a 10 year old... yeah I'm done with this book. I was already put of by the 10 year olds getting superpowers and stuff but yeah this is just too much.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola