VoidReader8577

If you are worrying about the lemon part, then just don't write it. Just hint that it happened and then move on. Lemons never add anything to stories anyway

I feel like Freya was way too out of control and reckless in this chapter.

Hiatus?

Maybe you can use the next chapter as an opportunity to introduce modern cuisine. Like Sebastian was complaining about the food in the beginning, so if he served some modern stuff it could lead to some interesting reactions

ok honestly while i really like this story, i feel like nothing has happened in the last few chapters. Like i get it, there was just a giant fight so everything needs to cool down. However its frustrating when there is so little that happens in a chapter.

wait he went to the harry potter world? When did that happen? Also i completely forgot he could travel to other worlds because how under utilized it is in this novel.

does the R18 really need to be multiple parts?

more chapters soon more frequently?