I watch over the worlds I have created, where beasts and insects reign."
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"Yes, the side story will directly impact the main story. Azerion is a very powerful character, and his goals also involve Aren. This is because Azerion plans to kill all his siblings, including the fifth prince. Since Aren is the fifth prince’s protector, these events will have a significant effect on the main story. I don’t plan to delve too much into the backstories of characters who don’t influence the main plot, but for those who do, I’m considering dedicating 2-3 chapters or more if necessary to explore their stories."
Thank you, I'm feeling a bit better. [img=Feeling it]
My English might not be perfect, but I try to make improvements as much as I can. How did you find the current chapter? Do you think I should keep going like this, or do I need to work on it more
Arctic Fox (Vulpes lagopus)
Fire Snail (Platymma tweediei)
Dear readers, do you think the pace of the story is fast enough, or does it need to slow down? Also, are you enjoying the story so far? I’d love to hear your thoughts in the comments!
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
I understand your comment, and I'm really sorry if that scene upset you. I'll take your feedback into account moving forward. I’ve been a bit busy today, so I wasn’t able to give my writing the attention I usually would. Thank you for your feedback.
I’m not very good at writing intimate scenes yet, and if anything felt awkward or out of place, I sincerely apologize. I’m working hard to improve, and I really appreciate your understanding and any feedback you can offer. Thank you for your patience and support
The fast pace at the beginning of the story will slow down as we dive deeper into many side characters and events in the later chapters. This speed was intentionally increased to lay the foundation for the main character's development. The pace will slow down in the upcoming chapters. Though I don’t have much confidence, I’ll do my best to create a balanced flow.