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PerditaTritonia

PerditaTritonia

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2022-08-28 加入Philippines
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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
    回復 Mel_Aniv

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I'll try to update once I've healed my wrist.

  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
    發表

    I didn't expect to be so invested on this story. I was really impressed with the story. A few grammatical issues and tense errors here and there but that never deterred my interest from not finishing the story!! Keep up the good work Author!!

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    Yeah for upgrades !!!!

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
    發表

    Please be careful

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    Grandfather is worried!!

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    The fight scenes seemed a bit rushed compared to before with the first guardian(?)

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    I love how descriptive you write about the environment and the battle scenes

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    I love that he is such a strategist!!

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
    發表

    Scavenger the goods!

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  • PerditaTritonia
    PerditaTritonia2 years ago
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    I hope he can save his parents!

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