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That's probably why he stated before that the protag was underprepared for what's coming to this world

Rule no.4 : just forget every other rule and stick to rule no.1

Never underestimate a cultivation novel author's ability to fuck up a story just by trying hard to make his mc look smarter than he actually is.

"I will see you guys again, tomorrow." sounds better in my opinion

I was talking in general

Thanks for your feedback. I can tell this fanfiction has influenced you on a very deep emotional lvl. So, good for you. I myself am not really interested enough to go back and reread the story just to refute your points whether they are about the ff or they about my personal life.

Its pretty interesting so far. I like the concept of manipulating emotions. Its pretty unique. I just don’t like alot of what the mc goes through, like i can understand torturing your mc physically and such, but humiliating him is such a nono from me at least. just give him a break man. Btw i have a question author. did you outline your story and such or do you just write as you go ?

Ugh accumulating frustrating trop upon frustrating trop now are we ?

author you keep puffing the mc and inflating him in such a grandiose way that doesn’t befits his actual capabilities

Why should he be intimidated just from locking eyes ? mc isn’t that strong to intimidate even with his emotion magic