Dao_8teh
I like to read. I hope I can make something out of it 😉✌️
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Dao_8teh36 minutes ago發表MC’s appearance now after reincarnation.
- Dao_8teh37 minutes ago發表
His appearance currently
- Dao_8teh21 days ago發表
You should add dates and locations.
- Dao_8teh22 days ago發表
It is alright, but I really feel like story and character development and building feels a bit stale and lacking something. I truly see you did make a significant effort to improve your writing ability. But I suggest you explore more the world and environment around him, and add a bit context and background on the main character. But overall, I feel like that this is a good start for a story I am interested in reading about! [img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend]
- Dao_8teha month ago回復 imunknown2611
I hope you don’t use too much AI, it would make feel too robotic and less natural
- Dao_8teha month ago發表
Plus, Just go to Japan or Korea instead. Remember at this point, you can make more your own novel
- Dao_8teha month ago發表
No, literally make the story less Chinese Nationalist bs!
- Dao_8teh2 months ago發表
What would be your general plans for this? And how does writing schedule take account for this?
- Dao_8teh2 months ago發表
Yes, equality wouldn’t be possible, as long as humans are divided and different from each other. But I hope this MC will allow one to become a better version of themselves via meritocracy and hardwork. It doesn’t mean they become on top of the chain, it just means that they would have better and stable life for themselves.
- Dao_8teh2 months ago回復 Holy_Slayer
But the question is, could he not lead it into irrational hatred? It is one thing to have a major skepticism and rational criticism towards it, but simply hating the citizens and things from the country is something absurd. I hope it is a rational hatred like government, policies, and even their actions.
