4thBlackGoblin

I hce bo idea what you saying bro. mind translating?

the writing quality on this story is above average. However, thee is little further I can say as I haven't reached far. the main reason being the biggest flaw of this story. this story has something I like to call, candy-strore mentality. It's like how if a kid was even allowed to take anything they want in a candy store. they'd take basically everything. oversaturating themselves without considering the long term benefits and cons. This manifest in this story with the main-character having two devil fruits. One is unique and interesting while the other is just there for a cool factor, it's absolutely unnecessary. and if you think that's mouthful already, he also has a system. one where he could just buy whatever. One of the most common and annoying systems I've seen in fanfic. And no, that's not all, he could also summon whoever in the world he wants, so he could have the best crew from the get go. So all I can say is it starts off too much like a child trying to fulfill their one piece fantasies, although it has potential, if the author realised and removed everything else I mentioned, I'd be great.

This fanfic has mentioned and exceeded the expectation I was given from the reviews. loved about 90% of it. if I had to say what is a bit of a downer for me about it, it would be how the MC at some point stopped being a part time worker into a behind the scenes boss. of course, that part is also still way above most novels here. In the end, it's just that good.

there is only one manly method I can think of.

I think the third hokage woupd have made some changes in this case. The biggest reason being that naruto and hinata already know and understand each other, while teaming them up will bring them closer and form stronger bonds. plus the three should be much stronger than the average genie now, Sakura would just bring them down. forming a complete scouting them is not worth breaking all that. and wasn't the main reason Sasuke and naruto were teamed due to their varying results?

I'll ignore this sentence completly... infact, it never existed.

I've been curious about this fruit's power. and ive forgotten most of the cannon. how far is one immune to physical attacks? like say for instance, if you get punched, the punch just slips throught. but what if it's a bullet? will it slip too. or what if a large object was thrown at alvida?

the thing about conversations is that exchange of names is often easily forgotten. so it's not so dumb to assume they gave each other's names during the 5 minute bliss time.

getting new bosses is my real job though...