Cherie_Floret

thanks for the suggestion.

right now i only read two chapters ,the story is engaging and the story setting is also good but in the second chapter the cross-over is a little confusing .

The storyline theme is unique.Overall the chapters indicate family drama and the time travel . How the protagonist will ready to take revenge the people who wrong him . Waiting for further chapters so we can get the whole picture what was happened in the past.

i am very grateful for the feedback , i will try to improve the things you mentioned.

Please write what you think about the chapter .