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it is all good bro don't worry fammaronie
Great first chapter and a good start to the novel [img=recommend]
Maybe I'm biased towards such texts but this novel is great. The plot is exciting and it has a wide room for extending itself. It seems to have consitantly good writing and I don't think it will disapoint anyone! 11/10
I'm sorry but I think the original is better writen