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The story development is quite slow paced and so is the updating status . Though it is quite troublesome to get a clear idea of MC'S personality or mindset. Sometimes the story feels to forcefully lengthened, missing its natural flow . But it still has a captivating storyline and background, making reading it enjoyable
Author , I think u missed a chalpter.
Author , I think you posted the wrong chalpter
Those bewitching jugs.....
The story is great. there is nothing more to say about the book as it is interesting and worth reading, except that the first 1/2 chapters were quite boring to me . ...but later the story is great. Just one request to the author is to make the mc more heartily (like kill the ones who deserve it but don't harm the unlucky ones. There is one tip from me that since the mc has god mode why not use a karma system and decide whom to kill.) Just keep the story at the same pace PLEASE DON'T DROP IT.
The previous novel was great. This one is also going very well , except that the story now feels more long and complicated (which is good, who doesn't like long novels with good stories?).. hope you give a good ending to the story . AND PLEASE DON'T DROP THE STORY IN THE MIDDLE .
You are doing great with the story.... nothing much to say . Just that it feels like mc s not so powerful and I think you should start giving him powers . ...... PLEASE DON'T DROP (as many people with good interesting plot leave the story hanging.)
Hey author , Will you be posting in webnovel only or in scribblehub also?
It's a great novel . the plot is great ...keep it up. And please don't drop.