DaoistGE3bw6

Not gonna lie, it was a great power concept. It was a bit scuffed around the 1-16 chapters but the author fixed his writings and actually makes great quality story. The characters have unique personalities and backgrounds. I have to rate this a solid 7/10, it was an enjoyable read, however there are some moments which I found absolutely irrelevant. The author needs to work on his writing quality, his grammars especially, his vocabularies and choices of words are splendidly used, no comment there. I like the MC's character, he is prideful yet isn't arrogant, he is skillful yet he isn't so skillful that it ruins the whole plot, he is smart as a truck which I most found fancy in this novel. I absolutely love how the author portrays MC's schemes. I see this as an absolute potential, good luck author!