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Did he pick engineering in college?
I see two pointy melons, I click. Thats it.
As for the book, its obviously good, now go and read it instead of wasting your time here.
The first thing I notice when I wake up is my belly button
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Good start, interesting buildup, the emotions are great. The writing style is pretty good, feels smooth. Keep up the good work author!
Thank you for pointing that out! I never really realised I wrote that there xD
Here's my honest review. The way you explain stuff, Great! But I would recommend reviewing ur chapters before uploading bcoz no one wants to read stuff with bad grammar right? And if English isn't your primary language I would suggest Grammarly or Quillbot. They really help with that. Hope you can become a sucessful fanfic author! 😊 (Altho I haven't become one yet 😆)
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