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amazing one of the best stories I've read in a while, writing and grammar are definitely way above average, the character design is also above average but with things that can be improved, updating stability and world background are very good, the only real issue is I can find in it is with some of the mc's decisions like compromising with blessings to keep the kid that's really it, I hope u continue this, and avoid the trope of mc keep being entangled in other people's problems.
99.999 percent chance that it's written using ai. Also, mc has no particular reason for doing stuff. One minute, he's all mysterious and shit. The next second, he's making issei strong for no reason
bro this is the third time akeno is saying this
you know, at some point, sooner or later, the plot is going to end, and then his system will be useless because there aren't any more significant events to witness, so I recommend you tweak the system a bit
absolutely amazing fic, everything is great, not to nit pick or anything but sometimes and it's rare there are parts that are repeated (like a sentence) but using different words and that's the only problem, if you don't count that there isn't more chapters, great job authors I hope you keep posting regularly and don't drop it
bro, you tried to cook and burned the planet I don't know If you burned the planet for a better one (in the upcoming chapters, but I swear to God I'll murder you if his ass gets violated) or you just fumbled.
although I lt was written using ai it was good enough, till Emma frost came looking for the mc, told him come with me to my academic (mc being a fucking idiot went, I mean your own mother sold you, how could you trust a stranger saying let me train you and be apart of my team, he was probably mind fked), then just trains with the hellions and let's Emma frost check all his memories.
after chapter 35, the author just started posting another story entirely without ever explaining himself