Alex_1044

nice

Pretty sure it’s imitating pilots from titanfall

raw?

The grammar and stability of updates are great but a major issue with the book is how 1 dimensional the characters feel, with many being constantly pitying the protag. While reasonable given his situation I didn't come to read some teen kid coping with everyone around him constantly thinking about how they bad for him

Since Mtl decided it did

Saying what i think everyone is thinking, the book is pretty much a fanfic of demonic sword. While there are differences in the small details that change the ways things happen the plot points are almost exact same to the point where i already know what's going to happen. Spoilers: Both bad fathers, both picks up mentors a smithing mentor who dies for them, both pick up an initial mentor to start off who gets surpassed and dies for them, both mother kills themselves to not restrain son, both kill abusive sibling and run, both go an academy and dominate as a rare darkness cultivator, both flee the mainland as trouble hits to go join a hidden darkness set, both darkness set patriarchs are looking for a dark inheritor, both Mc's act really similar in mannerisms, both end up having a Op transformation that ends up being a trump card, the list just goes on and on and its just tiring how similar they are.

The story isn’t that bad, just tons of people racist towards chinease writers. Like there’ nothing wrong with some parts and people just keep complaining. Overall not bad way to pass the time

By 100% meaning double current rate

The book itself has an solid background as well as the world building, the actual combat and everything is interesting but throughout the book we see people keep trying to go to the mc to "save him" despite being way weaker than him, the dialogue between woman and the mc is also extremely cringy....... overall if you cant handle cringe drop it

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