Anurag_Rai_4601

Better than most of the fics on this website, good idea , okayish writing, nice WB. Our MC can do multiple things, his abilities are also very interesting. You can also focus more on kingdom building and politics. Also your writing is too stiff,little bit of informal conversation and Interlude can do wonders. Overall 7 out of 10.

Bhai konsa maal phok rha hai , thoda to realistic rakh yar , history wala genre mai dal rakhi hai , Chinese mtl Sai bhi bekar hai , bhakt bano par itna bhi nhi.

Copy, Plagiarism At least give credit to original author , if you can't ask for permission. Report him......... ................................. ................ ..............

This is plagiarism, It's fictional from alternate history.com, the person is just re-posting them.

You idiot atleast give credit to original author and stop your patron. Don't plagiarise the story of other writer.

Naruto hero fist

Read all the chapters in 4 hours, really liked the concept and pace of story. Hope that author keeps updating the story because I am hooked and want to see what will happen in future. ...................................d.d.d.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x..xx.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x..x......x.x..x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x

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More more, I want a super op monkey d garp maybe he can eat one of the devil fruit.

I have just one request - one pov of tywin and doren nothing else , otherwise when we are going to have a small time skip to greyjoy rebellion .