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Thanks dude. I appreciate it.
First of all, if he was me he would actually be more perverted and avoid making instinctive decisions but secondly, trust me when I say the second volume is leagues better Or atleast that is what I have been told. Thirdly I like your honesty about it. If you don't mind could you please check out my other avatar fanfic but this time about the second Avatar. I need actually feedback on it. I remember the first five being a bit awkward with some elements but I need some honesty on somethings.
It doesn't sound good to me either, could you help dude
Yes I want to make him turn ss1 but not for a while. At the moment he is already way too strong. Anyone without the use of a devil fruit doesn't stand much chance against him at this point in the story. He isn't the strongest just yet but that's because it's still only the east blue.
Bro do you realize just how overpowered ss4 could be in this world. I mean come on like saiyan saga goku is the max anyone in this world can handle and i mean even the yonko. I also never said there won't be anything beyond ss1. It's still early stages and I had to limit this shit.
Can I assume you mean Ria? Dude she was definitely something else. I promise you she ain't done just yet.
Explain yourself bro
Good to know then it shall be done
My apologies but English is not my first language. I put the tag there because the Avatar is a reincarnation or maybe I am mistaken. This is not an isekai story.
Well obviously there is something else at play here. There is a reason for him being there discussed in the later chapters.