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another trash i always wonder why is almost all fanfic of swallowed star about luo feng like you we always see mc trying to please luo feng why not just make luo feng the mc i am not trying to say they should be enemy all i am trying to say is that mc should mind his business luo feng do not need a baby sitter if he as you for help and you can do it help if not just rest not your business.

well it is a good novel with mc who can manipulate people but well there is always a downside to novel in every chapter you always see the MC claiming that he love the heroines but always lying yes i get it mc is a manipulator but at least after mc conquer any of the heroines he should at least come clean with them about having other girls this is supposed to be a harem novel but it just look like a novel where mc cheat with different girl.

well the novel is good and is different from other novel you see everywhere but there is one thing I want to ask is for the author to please explain the mc appearance it say that MC is forty years old but does not tell us any about him if he look like normal forty years old man or less I just want to understand I have being reading novel from chapter 1-60 but does not even know the mc appearance and as for the harem tag from the look of things maybe when the novel end is there the romances would start.

well it is good novel from the 1-100 but it went downhill like it was a different author or something the begining we can see a mc who strong and keep getting stronger facing different enemy like a op mc but later all we can see is mc who's power is always seal and have enemy million time stronger than him and from and unexplained reason stop getting stronger making the plot giving me headache like there is many more I can't explain i quit.

well for me the story is above average at the beginning they are a lot of plot hole and flaw the author was trying too hard to copy spider man character but this is your novel write your own character and why it seem MC is stronger than spider man but for me it does not look like it and the mc is so obsesses being a hero like who does not want to be a hero but being too obsesses with it and the mc take it like everybody life is in is hand you are not a god you are just a guy with super strength take it step by step and sinces reading the novel I don't even know MC hight and also why is the mc still wearing glass or is he superman on disguise 🥸 and as for the harem i ham a great fan of harem like who the fuck does not like harem if your are a harem hater fuck you it is the best.

the greater the expectation the greater the disappointment the first 5 chapter I thought i found a good novel I wait for the novel to have more chapter but i was so disappointed the system is so annoying the punishment he give to the MC for failing a mission is more higher than the reward for example he can give you a mission and the reward would be a Tshirt but the punishment mc would be blind for 3days the system claim it can make mc the strongest in the universe before 3years but mc is weak as fuck his strength does not seem to increase why the protagonist of that world strength is broken is strength increase as fuck the first chapter he is 10 times stronger than mc the next time he 20 times so on and so.

well your average novel almost every chapter is R18 and almost the same girls Everytime and all the girls are use goods and the mc does not even have a way with woman either use forces or money the system is nothing special very weak so this novel in my eye does not deserve your time.

well the novel is good but you have to got some patience because the novel plot is always delay that sometimes it gets annoying and the mc is not likeable i mean some of his problem even a child we know how to solve it but he couldn't each plot just show us how annoying and stupid the mc is if not for lila and the triplet i would have quit this novel with a useless mc.

don't compare this to top tier i have never see a cultivator novel with the same level as top tier

this novel is very good not every time you see a peaceful novel that goes smoothly I just hope the author does not drop it.