Ash_khanal

The story is very captivating and with each chapter the excitement level increases. Its a very interesting story. Your work is absolutely amazing.

Its a very interesting story. The overall development is also good. I think the upcoming parts of stories is going to be very interesting. There are some mistakes but no one is perfect. I recommend it to all the readers.

thanks for the suggestions. Will do it.

The plot development is nice. Its a good story. The suspense about what is going to happen next is quite good. i recommend it to all the readers

I love this story. The plot, drama comedy every thing was just perfect. I love the Fl so much. She is brave and funny. There are some spelling mistakes so i suggest you could may be use grammarly it helps a lot. Over all loved the story.

It's a great story. The storyline, characters every thing is very interesting. It is easy to read too. It keeps the reader captivated by the story. Keep up the good work. I recommend this story to all.

Can you send more info in my email first? Its Ashkhanal01@gmail.com

The story has very interesting beginning. It keeps the reader always curious what is going to happen next. It gives a realistic vibes too. I recommend it to every one.

I honestly think its a good story. The starting was awesome. Every plot is so beautifully designed. I hope i can read the rest of the story soon.

This story is good so far. It gives the mysterious vibes. The Mc is not like scary cat who hide behind others, she is quite daring. It makes the reader curious about what is going to happen next.