PrimodialCaveman

I have read it till the 7th chapter and I have loved how it is paced. I have found myself enjoying this book.

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The plot seems interesting and it would be even better if sight adjustments were made. Overall I believe the story has potential. Although the Mc might need a bit work.

Love the way you wrote. The beginning of the story wasn't rushed nor was it slow. This story is should become popular. Also, I would suggest you to add some more tags to your novel such as mystery.

It's a good read. The author should steadily write and not rush. The book has great potential, if grammar is improved it has the potential to reach top of the charts some day.

Apologies I have made an error as this was supposed to me old town not world

i have sent a request

yes any advice/ suggestion is appreciated.

Feel free to ask me questions. There would be romance in the future but not at the moment. There would be dimensional traveling as well as kingdom building elements in the future. I hope everyone can give me feedback and I apologize in advance if you guys see grammatical mistakes english is my fourth language so it is a bit hard.