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This is the first time I've responded to my fanfiction review in a long time. First and foremost, I appreciate you for sharing your experiences, and your criticism is constructive. I admit that the part you pointed out is true, and I can't do anything but accept it because it is part of my learning. Perhaps this sounds shameless, but would you mind reading and reviewing my other fanfiction?
Sorry for my late response. Kiyoshi Fujino is the MC, and he is treated as such in the series, so I did the same here. There is no NTR, but some female characters may express interest in other male characters. If you have read the manga, you will definitely know, and it is the MC's responsibility to seize that opportunity. Don't worry. I, too, dislike having multiple MCs.
I saw your review while stalking your profile, but it didn't appear in my fanfiction. Possibly, this is a bug. First of all, thank you for the compliment. I truly do not deserve it. To be honest, I don't dislike systems and such. I just don't have a strong enough memory to remember all those numbers and skills. The rest is exactly as you said. Another thing that surprised me was that I didn't expect you to read my other fanfiction. Sorry I can't respond to the rest, but thank you for your positive review.
It feels strange to say this, but I appreciated your comment. You didn't hesitate to point out the flaws in my story, and you even tried to provide me with a variety of options, which helped me grow in a positive way. If you don't mind, I expect you to continue.
Thank you for your help. What I was most concerned about was my readers getting the wrong impression, and your explanation saved me.
Please accept my apologies for the delayed response. What you say is very true, as I have experienced it myself as a reader. @Wapmenace has also provided a brief explanation, with which I agree.
No hay nada de qué preocuparse, para que alguien se desarrolle y desarrolle una mejor historia, cosas como esta son normales.
Me alegro si te gusta, de ahora en adelante seguiré esperando tu apoyo.