Taragorm

Yeah no got to the mouthfull of food felt pissed off dropped

This is painful to read

Prime example is him fleeing from Snape which is straight up copy paste mcs a veteran fleeing am angry teacher is nonsensical

Not cowardly paranoid agree 100% mc is coming across as a 11 year old which mentally he is not

Okay im calling it out now copy paste plot following is donkey shit. Loving the fanfic so far but the copy paste is irritating

Newfound sense of fookin purpose I've seen this same bastard phrase in a hundred novels all with gpt being used not saying using ai is bad but every time I see this phrase I fookin foam at the mouth I'm sick to bastard death of seeing it even in novels I know have no ai involvement soon as I see this phrase I freaking cringe.

7th time I've seen this novel uploaded

Ai stink

I've snorted glue and rambled more coherently than this novel. This is most likely written by sheogorath on a skooma binge. Like the idea but its for one too fast paced power ups too fast and frequent. The moment I read about the marriage contracts I freaking cringed. overall a good read I recommend it as an interrogation tool.