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Daoist0HrvWK

Daoist0HrvWK

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  • Daoist0HrvWK
    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    I read it after that. He sure did. The only reason he did that was because his male cousin asked. If not. I’m sure he wouldn’t have helped. His female cousin. The first things he did was to leave manuals so she could find it. He was more proactive with her than the male cousin. The male cousin cares for him too but not as much as the female cousin. Yet he could help with her strength by cultivation manuals and the likes. Even as of the part where his nephew was strong. His male cousin was weaker while his female cousin was stronger In terms of talent. The male cousin has higher quality talent and a larger pool than the female cousin. Still a good story

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    He isn’t really stupid. He just likes getting reactions out of people. A bit naive to women as he seems to find a reason to get entangled with them And spare them for some reason or the other

  • Daoist0HrvWK
    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    Review as of chapter 250 Decent sorry so far Still waiting for him to kill the lady that has been attacking him and plotting against him He has killer her lackeys and the oerosn above her yet by some heavenly plot armour. She liveth Also. The junior sister of his master has no redeeming quality. She is just baggage and extra. Not even sure what quality made her to be the disciple. She is not needed

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    Best paragraph The council nominates this for Quote of the year

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    The novel started out okay. The first 2 chapters were nice. Then boom. Harem candidate #1 shows up and leads the plot to nowhere. How can you see someone and not be infatuated with them, Then right after your shower when you see them blush. Infatuation comes up. Such nonsense Later on, after a few chapters. Harem candidate #2 shows up and just makes it obvious that this guy is destined to be a simp. Not just any simp, A 3 S-class talent simp

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    Honestly. This is a rare gem The first few chapters are priceless. A few inconsistencies here but it is not glaring. The disciples he gets have the special value to them. Starting with the first disciple to the seventh. It is obvious that they have something unique to add to the story. This all ends at chapter 200 The inconsistencies become obvious. The Mc gets disciples Willynilly. There’s no logic or understanding behind it. A Few chapters after chapter 200. The novel changes from one that is cultivation based to one that is simpy The Mc takes on whole great world because he met a girl( Manman) at an underground place simply because her grandmother requested it. Then he decides to make her his disciple. What talent does she have? After that, at an auction. they met someone from the great world that destroyed the sect of his disciple Manman. The girl he met there was a princess. Guess what, Boom! Next disciple Then after that, disciples keep on rolling. He got another female disciple by chance and decided to go to her world for some reason. Note that he has surpassed the emperor realm. He still puts quasi emperors in his eyes. Considering that they are not anywhere strong enough to even matter in most things, much less his matters. Romance starts getting forced. Romance starts getting implied. The Mc starts changing fundamentally from what his values and motto was originally. He starts being showoffy. The novel gets a lot of filler. I stopped at Chapter 300 It was becoming too much of an eyesore.

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    The filler disciple manman isn’t even young. She is already ancient. She is over 10times the MCs age. In terms of Geneology, He would be in her grandson’s Great grandson’s generation

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    Typical harem seeking protagonist. Beauties everywhere it almost seems like a hidden setup. Concept is nice. But what purpose do the harem serve in this Novel.

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    The beginning started all good. As of chapter 50 He has run into his female cousin who he gives resources. A female young cultivator who he took as his maid. A demon fox reincarnation into an empress. All talented It isn’t stated that he used the soul seal on either. He has also run into a male cultivator who he used the seal on. His male cousin that wants the best for him is left out of the loop. For example, He gave the female cousin scriptures, manuals, Pills and more. His male cousin got none of those things. Even when he knew his cousin had problems, He didn’t think to help him out or try to improve his strength Simply because that cousin isn’t female. Updates coming soon after another 50 chapters

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    Daoist0HrvWK3 years ago
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    The story is a bit nice. Just that you have the cliche family of father, mother , Main character and sister. One of the family member loses their life or is injured or ill. In this case, The father lost his life. That’s just a surface look at things. If I go deeper, It would be much longer