tentalagim

lol, you replaced the word mage in rummage with wizard.

I believe 13 is a she?

The sword that only works because stupid people always think, "it can't possibly work against MY ultra powerful defense," and then it does because that's all it does? "Who could have ever anticipated this!?" every shinobi ever killed by it thought; stupidly.

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

Absolute slop. each chapter could be less than a paragraph long and convey the information better in every way. Seems to be generative text, Isn't set in Twilight at all. Immortal witches and runic magic and oc's galore.

Last chapter clearly stated that she wasn't wearing her suit.

love how all they have to do is stop being pieces of shit lol.

They breathe to take in smells and talk, not for oxygen. No heartbeat.

her breath is cold. Just FYI. loving the story so far.

So far it's pretty entertaining.