Winnie_jazella1

Hello, this is the author of Bob the Accountant here. I just wanted to come here and share my views on the book. I was suddenly inspiration to write it after years of writers block. It is just a simple book that isn't much at firs, but I write it in great hope that it becomes relatable to many of you. I wrote it in hope of sharing my sentiment that the little things in life are as important as the big things.

This isn't my first book, however, it will be my most authentic book. It is inspired by being a young adult( which I am currently). I will be showing everyone a glimpse of being a young adult in Africa.

I just started this on a whim today.

Congrats on embarking on this journey. Your book is shockingly vey impressive and it has a lot of potential to grow further. As an author I wish you all the best.

Your start was quite captivating and wonderfully done. I support your writing as I believe it is one of kind given that your start is lovable.

Good start, the scene throws us into the story immediately and familiarizes us with the plot.

Description. I like that.

You story has a good plot and it is well thought of. I encourage you to think outside the box with words. This will help you in the long run as it will enable your readers to feel and relate better to your characters. You seem to be using a mixture of Eastern and western forms of paragraphing. I advice you to stick to one. I have really high hopes for this book.All the best.

Eliminate the 'and' before the second 'months'.

It is a mixture if western and African writing influences. African novels also tend to have long paragraphs. If interested check out Chimamanda's books.