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Are you deciding the seasons again?
How could Doflamingo fall while Luffy is still on his way to Punk Hazard?
Great keep it up 🤩🤩
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The story is very good, keep going ..................................................................................................................................
The name is bad because it is derived from the name Rimuru, and it is also not appropriate for a vampire. I think that names like this are better Dracula or Alucard Mihawk Shanks Sirzix Jasper Lucian Damian
The Body Replacement Technique is not a space technique, but it is a degraded type of summoning technique. In order to summon the wood log, the location of the clinch and the smoke is not a defect. It is to cover your escape routes. It cannot be a space technique, because the space techniques cannot be performed without space convergence.
You must add the feature of tracking and self-destruction for each invention so that the enemy does not get your inventions such as the Navy, the World Government, Shanks and Whitebeard because it will be very bad for the enemy to fight you with your own weapon and also for you to have an advantage
Keep going don't drop it................................................................................................................................