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Hey I think writing at times isn’t clear leading to confusion between King Liang and the groom who is from Marquisate making them sound like same people. They are different characters and her sister had saved the King Liang in previous life whilst this wedding procession was on its way back to the Marquisate family.
The story starts off really well and keeps the reader engaged and intrigued however post 100 chapters it started to become disappointing. The idea or goal that the FL has is to protect her family, she starts building her power and forming new alliances with that goal however there is hardly any attempt from her end towards changing fate of the war that claimed lives of all the men in her family. She is called female Zhuge Liang and often doesn’t want to rely on the crown prince as once bitten twice shy however there are times when it feels she is stupid, hypocritical and overconfident as she is not really cautious and vigilant enough - such as her aunt song’s death which could have been prevented. It mentions about her building the power but there is nothing about deployment of that power to protect her family including her father and siblings who are fighting the war. Plot only focuses on her trying to play politics and scheme however even those plots are not very intriguing. Infact the other characters have developed better than the FL. The most interesting characters are but obviously The Crown Prince and The Empress - frivolous, bold, carefree and charming. Both characters leave an impression in every chapter they are part of which the FL/MC fails to do. The villain is even more boring not worthy of being villain. I didn’t expect the story to be full of happiness however there are lot of flaws and it doesn’t show much effort from MC towards her original intentions. Sorry for the harsh review however after spending 800 plus coins I truly felt disappointed with the progress of the story. The fact that it gives reader hope of bringing an interesting story to the table however lacks due to lot of flaws as story progresses to me is more disappointing than reading a story which lacks right from the start as I wouldn’t spend my time and money on the latter.
Xie Qian
Yeah worthless thing which required to maintain the life u have rich fella 😂
But he is 😂😂
He sounds like a grumpy mother cos his son chose the new wife 😝😝😝
This might be her so called secret 🤫