celestialshadows1

thanks for the update man love it can we please have a extra chapter. I mean we did get any for three days worth of chapters. love please make it a little longer though

we have reached over 2500 there we need 6 extra chapters

please update it has been two days now as well please give us extra chapters. update please

listen this story is amazing but if you are not consistent with the updates it will go to the dump. this is one of the only good mha fanfiction so please update

i love this fic there was no effort put into the translation please translate it properly and read through the fic before posting it. Consider using gramerly and don't just Google translate

amazing book please continue to update it i love rhe premise pf the work

alright love the story the concept the character and all of that if it is that you are translating please read through and make sure you have the right pronouns and gender for the characters the story is good overall though just fix the gender and pronouns issue it is quite annoying

so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars

hi I love the story and the concept the writing is amazing the grammar is good so far but you keep on changing the gender of characters and quite frankly that is extremely annoying please fix that

hi this story is absolutely amazing words can't describe how good it is please update the story you have my power stones please update