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This story has a lot of potential but when it comes Romance it is completely gone down hill. The MC was pushed into romance with an OC too early and having romance with Cersi or Elia would have far more better for story. Unfortunately author in opinion here made a blunder. Having a Romance with Cersi or Elia would have created a better narrative for the story, where the MC grows in strength and eventually gains his girl. This would have been far more better than that rushed romance with OC. all the dynamics that could been added to win the hand of Cersei or Elia. Sadly wasted 😞 potential. But nonetheless story is good enough[img=recommend].

Author if you are gona use real world examples then please put some research into it. Saudi Arabia economy is very weak and there has been little to no progess, Russia's economy has been stagnant and falling ever since USSR. China economy is heavily based exports and domestic demand is almost negligible because it's people cannot afford much. only Eastern China is advanced specifically the areas near the cost and rest of the parts China are in a not so good situation. Where the western demacrocies are way too well off, people have highers pays, can afford more and let's not forget majority of technological advancements come from democratic nations. Please research a bit before giving real world examples.

Oh this is pure gold what a cahpter. Can't stop laughing

omg what a find loved this story and I am quite excited for more.

Daphne is a blonde.

Seriously people anything close to Monarchy is trouble. all those revolutions to remove monarchy from power were not done because people were bored. Monarchy is a highly inefficient system where society is ruled by few families and based on merit and skills. This is why Imperium was so messed up.

Bad idea

an Empire yikes gg

I believe it was unnecessary to introduce gene seeds from warhammer 40k and the MC certainly does not need them. In my opinion halo and warhammer should be separate. Humanity in halo universe should not be possible of such feats and MC should not have such knowledge. I hope this is not a one man show because if it is then there will be no character development. still it's a good story

I believe it was unnecessary to introduce gene seeds from warhammer 40k and the MC certainly does not need them. In my opinion halo and warhammer should be separate. Humanity in halo universe should not be possible of such feats and MC should not have such knowledge. I hope this is not a one man show because if it is then there will be no character development. still it's a good story.