i like to reed
寫作
閱讀
294
閱讀作品
It was my first group fight, and I think there might be some issues with the flow. If you can identify where it needs improvement, I'd appreciate your feedback. It'll help me make future battles more engaging.
🌟 Hey Readers! Shameless author here, waving the usual 5-star flag. I've poured my heart and soul into this novel, and I genuinely hope it brings you as much joy as it brought me during the writing journey. Ever wondered why there's a dearth of quality Re:Zero fanfictions on Webnovel? Well, after rewatching the anime, I realized the intricacies of the characters and plots in Re:Zero are no walk in the park. Crafting a compelling fanfiction can be quite daunting. But fear not! I've taken up the challenge to pen a Re:Zero fanfiction that I believe stands up to the series' complexity. If I may say so myself, I think I've done a pretty decent job. I'd love for you to dive into at least the first 10 chapters—they serve as the perfect introduction to my writing style and offer a glimpse into the novel's future adventures. Feel free to drop any questions below, and I'll do my best to answer them when time allows. Just a heads up, though—I won't spoil any surprises, so if your question treads into spoiler territory, my lips (or rather, keyboard) will be sealed. Now, sit back, relax, and enjoy the journey!
Escaping the clutches of fate is no cakewalk, especially for someone with his fair share of weaknesses. It's crucial to remember that the world doesn't dance to his tune. Even if he desires freedom, he doesn't have to get it. The Goddess has her own agenda, and aligning with fate serves her interests. That's why she gave him Fatestriders Gaze. Remember, she didn't send him to another world just for the sake of it. She has her reasons. The whole deal with protecting Emilia isn't just a personal choice—it's a necessity. If she bites the dust, Puck, bound by his contract, would go all apocalyptic on the world. It's a messy situation he's trying to prevent. And hey, inhabiting a foreign body? That's not a walk in the park. Most times, souls clash and reject each other, leading to a messy demise. It's a risky business. There are always concequences. So, no worries—I've mapped out the story intricately. Got all the bases covered. If you've got more questions, hit me up!
Big thanks for throwing your thoughts on the skill system at me! I know that some people might think that "Limit Break" is somewhat underwhelming for an EPIC skill but let me tell you – it's meant to be straight-up bananas. You know why? Because these skills can level up and evolve. Picture this: you're vibing with someone on your level, and bam! They pull the "Limit Break" card, and suddenly you're rethinking life with a hole in your gut. That's the vibe we're going for. Now, about skill evolution and level-ups – they're the secret sauce. "Calculation," the seemingly low-key rare skill you're side-eyeing, might start flexing some serious brainpower as it levels up. Watch it morph into some next-level "Parallel Thinking" wizardry. It's all about keeping you guessing, ya know?
Elsa Granhiert
Puck
Emilia
Felt
That made me spit out my drink...