Nehal_Ahmad_1923

Over-all I gave it average better than some not best of its genre can do better peace out

kill lin jue to make ling ging angry

When i was reading it felt good but after sometime i just can't seem to read it

It's good but it can be better if our mc can use some braincells

His home gets attacked by burglars and he makes his family move there without any investigation even though he gets money from the origin world and can use it to stay in the hotel for the safety of their family

every weapon has an intent not just sword,first and spear, forgotten about sabre intent,gun intent

Man it's very engaging, nowadays good novels are rare find

Update more chapters 😭 keep the quality as it is

bland and boring no intelligence of characters , picking olivia when she is bitching ah and instead of getting stronger he is thinking of saving the whole world type of things