Starr_Westen

My thought on this is when you say "the boy" you need more detail like who is the boy i like the story so far as a descriptive writer i would make more sense to say who he is.

I gave it 5 stars because its just amazing between the switch of funny and serious is what makes it amazing! honestly i can't imagine the characters looking any different the story line is amazing with the way it unfolds is perfect great job 10/10