Dragon_Warrior0

I've read a lot of cliche stories on this one but this one looks really unique to me. Mainly because the FL is interesting and so are the side characters.

This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so. ...... The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc. Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid. Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting ) That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.

The author here. There are various things I want to say so I hope you'll listen. The story will be slow and will take its time establishing itself so I hope you'll join the MC on his journey with an open mind. It'll take time for the MC to grow up and become OP and gather his harem so stay tuned. I don't want to force things and focus on world-building a little bit more before getting to good stuff. The updated might also be inconsistent since I'm quote busy outside writing so I hope you all will support me by giving me feedback.