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I read up to chapter 16 and here are the points I liked and didn't like, honestly: I liked it: The development is well constructed and slow, where the protagonist learns more about his powers and the world, the characters summoned are also developed in an interesting way. The story is just beginning and is very enjoyable to read. I didn't like it: one thing that bothers me personally is the MC's simple-minded mentality, it's understandable after all he was just an ordinary person, screams, anger, fear and more screams, as a leader he should Act logically, but this can be developed in the future. Now the main point "villain" and "dark" that was why I came to read this fic, but I was disappointed the MC is an average anime hero, I don't know if there will be any twist or personality change but It's something I've been waiting for since the beginning. Anyway, it's a good story with good development, I hope for new chapters.

As an Overlord fan I'm disappointed, I was looking for a fic with the "DARK" tag and I came across this Overlord one, but it was a disappointment, all the difference and the incredible construction of Overlord is destroyed, in Overlord we follow a villain or anti-hero, and that's exactly why I decided to read it using the "dark" tag, but this new Ainz is an idiot with no dignity, the author just rewrote the story, saving people he liked in the cannon, the disciples were the most disappointing, they're all rubbish, old guardians are monsters nazarik's pop are already better than everyone, mc doesn't want genocide of humans, children and innocents, but he doesn't mind massacring other races, in short this is a copy of the cannon where the author just saves people who were killed and changes things without development none. This is simply an insult to the incredible work that is Overlord.

I've never been so disappointed, I love it where there's a mix of anime. Comedy, romance, these are elements that when they are well written are incredible but... FUCKING NTR, this made my desire to read completely drop. Well for people who like ntr (if there is anyone crazy for that) you will like the first chapters.

NEVER has a synopsis fooled me so much, REALISTIC was what caught my attention, but this is an r18, a child having sex, is this realism? IF YOU ARE READING THIS COMMENT, DO NOT READ THIS HORRIBLE FIC.

There are some positive and negative points in this fic: Positive: there are few good fics and even fewer that are well written, so it's been good to follow along, I'm also enjoying the writing and this mix between two worlds. Negative: Well... the mc of this fic is a subaru 2 slowly becoming Emilia's puppy, making her world revolve around Emilia, the only difference is individual strength, why is that? no creativity? there are many good things that could be the focus of the main plot, but again it all comes down to a naive and incompetent half-elf, because the MC is one of the real candidates I thought there would be a political plot with development of secondary characters, but again... .emilia this emilia that. DISAPPOINTING

Honestly this is...disappointing, the mc in the story showed us that he doesn't like cliches, like (Mc hides his powers, mc is a virgin etc), but then why is he falling for the old cliché, losing control of his emotions? like the MC's from Shounen, he should be calm, analyze the situation and think about the best route, but he doesn't do any of that, which is really pathetic. child. Anger? the mc can literally create skills he could just snap his fingers and finish off his enemies or create an unimaginable torture skill but let his anger take care of him *sigh* I really hope his maturity develops.

My opinion Personally I love Overlord, that's because we follow the villain's story, something unusual in anime. The main element that makes overlord incredible is the yggdrasil power system (races, jobs, spells, items, worlds, guilds), Maruyama manages to give a unique characteristic to each character despite the cliches, this means that despite the huge difference in New world levels don't spoil the story. There are two things that I personally didn't like. 1- "no level limits" the MC of this story is level 1000+ that makes level max(100) nothing more than garbage, which breaks the fun of the story a lot, since it doesn't it has a good development which is normal for someone who is not a professional writer. 2- the other is obviously the waste of the "Yggdrasil System" that shows levels (def, atk, spatk...) jobs, races, that lets us know exactly how character building works, but this new system is just confusing as it's not that informative. Despite all this, congratulations author, you are improving your writing with each chapter, there are no good overlord fics, this is one of the few fun to read, so keep going :)

Obviously this is the best option, despite not having a system he will still have half of his memories (he can still use 1 wish to claim all his memories), knowing the whole plot is an absolute advantage, and there are also several powerful wishes but not broken example: Talent - x10 x1000 x???. Weapon - ryujin jakka Magic - Great sage, belzebuth(tensura). among hundreds of other options

more expected?... the first half of the grand line is very rare for someone to know haki, only in the second half (new world) is it more expected to find haki users, this is a basic knowledge of one piece. '-'

It's funny... but why is God in such a hurry? god already knows what the mc will ask for and also already knows how long this conversation will last, after all he is GOD (Omnicient), if he was in a hurry he could simply reincarnate the mc without wasting time talking since the mc forgot this conversation anyway manner.