Mesarik

Another book Anohtet attempted, Maybe this one will stick? Who knows, I like it, but I still have a lot to grow for, so I won't be giving it 5*

It's written very well, I don't need to reread sentences because they don't make sense :D. There's also no typical blabbering about the world that doesn't involve the MC, instead, it has a slight flavor to the story while still keeping it connected to the MC That's poggers :D I would have loved to see some trouble accepting the change in gender, but Alex just smiled it off and said. "I'm a woman, nice." And proceeded with his thing :D I like it a lot, so Happy reading fellow readers :D

Interesting and realistic reaction to a bunch of wolves showing up, I like the characters acting really like characters instead of just named puppets. with the stability of updates, I think that this story will make it.

Very descriptive, I like Michale's confidence along with his easy-mindedness. While the updating schedule is not the best, I think that can be easily fixed, I like the sense of mystery in the beginning and not waiting around and throwing us straight into the action.

Raynold is a hard gamer, already a connection with most readers :D It's good that he uses his brain instead of overwhelming power. Garen is also a very nice character, his in genuine interest keeps it fresh form the classical evil Mod that runs the trial.

Nice slow start, it lets you breathe in the world nicely. Leon seems to be a late bloomer, so I'm interested in where his decision goes. After all more chapters are needed, but with this quality, I believe there's nothing not to worry about.

I like Ethan open mindnes, the story gives me Good Miss Kobayashi maid vibes, which I like. I kinda needed some pretty calm story like this. so keep it up!

Funny, I do wish you were an Editor though. It would make it so much easier :D

As an author of this mess, I know that I’m giving it my all. But my inexperience can be clearly seen in this story, not to mention that my knowledge of the English language is also lacking. The biggest problem I have is the stability of uploading, its really stressful to follow the self set boundaries that I placed upon myself. So I'm giving myself a 3,6. Happy reading :D