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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Interesting Up to the uploaded 9 chapters the con is a little bit grammer i guess? but not that much, the flow is decent and plot is nice

I wouldn't spoil much in the review, so read yourself to find out. but, I would say it's a worthy read and you won't regret it.

I wouldn't spoil much in the review, so read yourself to find out. but, I would say it's a worthy read and you won't regret it.

Uhm, you see... In english there exists a simple punctuation mark known as Question Mark. try to use that

oho~ young blood kekekreke

Keke, weak.

dumb. for making the trap work better, he should be fastboth to agility would make more sense