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Hmmm you know... I was thinking. A serious chat between Fujin and Itachi, the conflict and disagreements between their views would be amazing to see,because from Fujin's perspective, Itachi was just another prodigy ruined and manipulated by Konoha, serving as just another cog And if Itachi saw a little of Fujin's true face, what thoughts would he have? Anger for being what he hates? Regret for having thrown his future away? Hope that he is cunning and free from the manipulations of that world and can bring the true peace he wants?

Unless Danzo dies, Obito is restrained, Itachi leaves the scene, Orochimaru changes, and five hundred other things happen, having relationships will leave Fujin very vulnerable. For example, Mei Terumi was very supportive of Fujin, wanting to establish an alliance, and since she is supposed to reach kage level, it wouldn't be unusual for them to start having an interest in each other, because he wouldn't be attracted to girls his own age since he is mentally much older even more than Mei, and he wouldn't need to protect her there. Since he will become much stronger in the future, he can create a superior version of Edo and simply revive Mieko, however this would be quite problematic to adapt and remain coherent, Furthermore, under normal circumstances the Uchihas are not problematic, they even seem to lack affection if you notice that they do not know how to deal with people, feelings and express themselves, however in themselves in specific situations they can become fearful, Mieko knowing the truth that she and everyone she loved died for nothing and betrayed by those who claimed to be family could be a mental shock and cause madness and the curse of hatred in it, the narrative of the original work established many complicated things. It gives the perspective of someone from the modern world, Ninjas are not so different from cunning killing machines, Fujin even complains about what he became there in the chunnin exam due to the influence of this world,his house (The most brilliant idea and the one that makes me laugh out loud every time🤭😂) is a living reflection of the distrust and caution with that world, remember when he first met Ryu and flying on his back touches on this kind of subject. Fujin will definitely have some relationship in the future, he is not a eunuch (the fact that he checked Anko's quality proves it well) so at least I think there is a greater chance of him having a relationship with older women, which is not a problem, because he will increase his lifespan or acquire immortality, he may well pass this on to his future partner. I honestly don't want to see Fujin losing someone he likes, the monstrosity he will become with this could pale Madara and Kaguya together, so him getting someone kind of towards the end It's okay at least for me as long as there are about 500 EXTRA chapters of this later hehehe.

Want to ask you something and see your opinion on it, do you think Baryon mode could become a transformation without risk of losing the Bijuu/life? I always thought Naruto's base was ridiculous, this is proven when he even ganks Sasuke with clones sending Rasengan spam he still gets beaten unless use the cloak, if he had a much more solid and powerful base, Baryon would have less risk? Naruto, despite training, compared to those who actually train in the work, is cute, he only trained more seriously when he had the opportunity to learn powerful jutsu/techniques that others had to think for him, because he didn't have that kind of notion. Kurama carried him too much on her back, because most of his strength came from her. Another detail is that it does not specify exactly the difference of being a Perfect Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi, since there has never been any besides Naruto and Kurama is highly different from the other Bijuus, I risk saying that the prolonged perfect connection with Naruto as someone who already had Hagoromo's chakra and son of another Jinchuuriki of the same may have opened the possibility of this transformation (Being a evolution of the Bijuu, because both in quality/quantity it was in a greater margin). So much so that soon after Kurama revives by merging with Himawari, she could even transfer healing and still comes from a lineage of several Jinchuurikis of the same. Remembering: This is just a theory of mine that I was thinking about now, and seeing the possibility of Naruto going another way in this kind of aspect could be interesting. PS: Your novel is getting more amazing every day.

Leylin + Shang + Han Jue = Fujin Lack of seasoning🤏 It still lacks a lot of psychological depth, it still seems superficial and shallow. This is just my constructive criticism from someone who likes your fic. I really like the way Fujin acts, Cunning and Cautious, he knows the importance of staying under the radar, something that even regressors who for some reason forget this, even though they have a vast experience that Fujin never had as a transmigrator from a modern world never had,I've always thought this was a fatal narrative error in regression works, where they act very arrogantly and create ridiculous conflicts for no reason, apart from the unlikely scenarios, Your fanfic solves a problem that even other famous people miss, I will definitely read your other novels.

Three Heads + Zero Tails + Lost Tower Power Line = Fujin creating his own Bijuu👀💀

*Nine Clones

Fujin is already at the Sage level. And because he has a very solid base, he can face and even defeat those beyond his level given the situation, tactically subduing someone with much more jutsu and experience of battle like Orochimaru, someone who has already created a kind of false immortality without fighting with everything. So, he is more complete than the Sennins in terms of combat, what is missing now they are better chakra reserves, ways to cauterize genjutsu, a shield to protect the body from attacks and further increase base strength. All of this can be done with Senjutsu, Bijuu and Lightning Chakra Mode, since he is still vulnerable to combat styles based on speed/lethality/genjutsu and Chakra absorption like Itachi/Minato and Pain. About Hashirama and Madara, with a Bijuu to supply the reserves, I don't know if they would tank several guided thunder from Saisho no Hikari(other Rasengans and Vacuum he creates) and a fully refined Wind Domain combined with Sage Mode Perfect from Futon, besides that we don't even know the aberrations of seals that Fujin will create with the Fuin Field and with his talent in space-time ninjutsu greater than even Minato's. At god levels, you may remember that Fujin has the ambition to create his own Doujutsu, and everyone is bald to know how broken those with a Doujutsu lineage are, an Uchiha level Chunnin if he awakens the MS is automatically level S, and this can vary even stronger depending on the unlocked skill, let's see how the Author will surprise us. I also had a prejudice against fanfics😅, however it is precisely because of this that an anime like Naruto, at first I didn't show much interest, made me start watching (yes, I started reading one Naruto fanfic without having seen Naruto🤣)

I thought it would be pretty mediocre, I'm going to read it by turning off my brain to enjoy it peacefully, but look... I thought it was good! Kaede is a very fun MC, It's hard to see a cool female protagonist without it being forced. However, it's too short! missing filling😂. OBS:In my opinion, your ending is better than Canon🤭🤣(pin indeed) ---------------------------------------- I saw that you made a Yu-Gi-Oh fic, you know I had an idea a while ago that would definitely be interesting to see a fic about it. "I reincarnated in YU-GI-OH with a Digimon Deck" I don't know if you like the franchise but it could be a good one.

Author, is Fujin already able to mark Hiraishin with his wind hands? I don't know, that would be very broken😂 mainly because with Sage Mode he would expand the size of the domain I think.

What a shame. It's very rare to see a fanfic so well structured, with so much potential. Even if the problem was money, nothing that a Patreon couldn't solve. 😔😔😔😔😔😔