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I like the mc but I have to correct you here. “Family” is super loose in Percy Jackson universe, most of the Demigods are raised by single parents and are lucky to see their godly parent even once. Even if they are connected by blood, there’s several degrees of separation between the monster children and human children. In effect, they are essentially strangers. Theres really not much motive for the mc to go so far for Percy.

You mean Sophons?

I thought I read this somewhere before. You should report this guy, what fu**ing degenerate.

Found the mtl. It’s called I! Heaven's Will, Let Teyvat Become The Supreme World on mtlnation or 我！天理，让提瓦特成为至高世界 on faloo. Always seems super scummy when a translator doesn’t credit the original author. The translation is okay, definitely much more readable than the mtl but it’s not super high quality either.

Fun fact, you can’t actually cut through flesh with a bone saw. They were meant to cut bone without damaging the flesh or tissue.

Wait this was chatGPT? All of it?

You mean my review? Also, why are you still here lmao. It’s been 3 months.

Makes my head hurt. Seems like this author has a tendency to over explain, which also causes a lot of repetitiveness. In the first chapter alone, there’s a mind reading ROB that keeps repeating the same things over and over. For example, some girl chose to reincarnate as Frieren, and the ROB a paragraph later goes “she’s the first person to choose a different race” like bruh we got that already you don’t have to say that again. Happens again when mc picks his class as well, the ROB goes “the outcast is a weak class but it’s good if they know how to use it” and the mc parrots that a paragraph later. Even if you don’t know how to show not tell, at least stop repeating what you told over and over again. Also please stop using italics. The more you bold or italicize something the less impact it has. There’s no need for the fancy stuff, it only makes it worse if you don’t know how to use it. If normal words are good enough for real authors, it’s probably good enough for you.

I’ll give you a piece of advice too. If you can’t handle the heat, go to Wattpad. Wattpad doesn’t have a review feature like Webnovel so I know for a fact that if Wattpad readers don’t like something, they’ll just drop it, no criticisms or anything. Wattpad’s system is entirely around user interaction so if they don’t like it, your fanfic will just drift to the bottom and you can keep writing to yourself like you wanted.

The whole “you can’t complain about free things” argument is stupid. The obvious counter-argument is why you’re posting something online if you can’t handle the backlash. I don’t think either side was wrong at first, because there’s nothing unacceptable with posting constructive criticism and there’s nothing unacceptable with arguing about the constructive criticism either since that’s how you learn and make improvements. What IS unacceptable, however, is making an entire chapter to oust the guy in front of all your readers. That does nothing except embarrass the guy and feed your over-inflated ego. This is embarrassingly immature.