Clark_Trent

I am not feeling like reading this novel any further. Might check it out in the future though.

Intriguing start for this novel. The author certainly knows how to build up the mystery and tension. The author has tried to establish world-building and lore, but it's just starting right now, so I don't know how it might go. Fingers crossed. Hopefully, this wouldn't get dropped half ways.

Oh, Theo is kinda sick man.

it's hard cuz author is a student and he doesn't have much time.

you are welcome here

Good pacing. loving it

indeed

Needs some improvement, but keep up the good work