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Thank you!

This is such a well thought of story. I'm honestly very impressed by the author's ability to give us a perfect description of the enviornments and the characters we are reading about, this author must have been writing for some time, this is really good.

Well described!

Hi, as mentioned earlier, Xy was reminiscing an old memory of him and his eldest lost brother. "He" refers to his brother.

Really well written book, i also love how you described the environments very well and the situation certain characters were in, i will have to say calling this book good is an understatement, i'm realy liking it.

Really unique set of a fantasy story from my perspective, and it's something personal but i found it funny and cool how you put "The End" at the end of your chapters, gives the story a dramatic twist. I do suggest you to divide the sentences a bit more, i often saw some walls of text but it didn't bother me that much, well done on this one.

This is a very solid story buildup with amazing writing quality. The concept of the MC switching to another gender very much reminded me of the manga Boku wa Mari no Naka, i really like the unique concept, this is so far a very impressing story!

What a rollercoaster of emotions those chapters were, i really enjoyed the last chapter, the author did a great job pulling the emotions of the reader, and twisting it all over. However i did notice some wording mistakes, and some paragraphs were like a wall of text which did displease me, but besides that, this is a solid story.

No problem! <3