I am just a high school student in his final year. Writing and reading novels is my passion as well as a hobby
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Good chapter.
Really digging this so far.
This is getting interesting.
First of all, I love the writing style of the author, although the dialogues could use some fine tuning. The descriptions that the author adds really elevate the scene. Now, coming to the story. It started of good, with a lot of mystery elements sprinkled here and there. I have read up to chapter 10 and I must say this is a really promising novel.
The author has put her heart and soul into this work. Character interaction seems extremely natural. The main character is extremely cute and mystery is there to spice things up. Extremely intriguing story so far and excited to see what's next.
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Well, I can't tell you much right now but you will know once I continue my novel in September. Be sure to tune in
I re-read the chapter. If I ever got some free time, I will try to rewrite it.
I will try my best but I only have couple of hours to write so some chapters are a bit short.
I am happy that you read all the chapters. Can you please elaborate how you felt reading and which areas could use improvements? Your feedback is much appreciated.