greenarchers

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

congrats!

nice premises unique story not the type i usually read here

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

certainly author has good plot in mind... just the belly button part is not a good thing for me... why make fun of us? anyway I'll accept it if she has other abnormality before hating her missing belly button... but your portray as missing a body parts as freaks... before the wings came up.... that's disappointing.... no one deserved to be treated like a freak just because he was born that way...

i know it's fantasy and comedy but why put us as if we, who lacks normal human parts, were disabled and freak? we function the same as other human its not disgraceful to be missing a belly button

how did she even born healthy? People without belly button still has scars (flat or stitched) from where the umbilical chord was attached it's not necessarily in the middle...