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Oh😯, that explains a lot.

I enjoy the simple, straightforward style of this story. It's an easy read with steady pacing. It feels almost like watching a daytime drama with a full and diverse cast of characters. All with their own personalities, life issues, and backstory. Kudos to the author👍.

Vampires, magic, and a soul contract; a recipe for a great story! The reader is quickly drawn into the midst of the action as Freya's pact with Artium begins. The scenes are well captured, and the mystery of why she's being hunted makes you want to keep reading. Great work.

At the end of the paragraph: he was quite an experienced what? Vampire? Mage? Fighter?

Wow, this story is PACKED with drama. It starts off with tension and maintains this as it goes along. It has a lot of potential and just needs some polishing.

This story is intriguing right from chapter one. Both Acera and Sophie's characters are strongly depicted, and the tension surrounding their circumstances keeps you reading. This is a great start.

This is a story filled with strong emotions. The metaphors are beautiful, and it has some truly thought-provoking lines. It's evident the main character is very self-reflective. I think readers can also use this to evaluate some aspects of their own thoughts on life.

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The opening of chapter one really hooks you; I was immediately interested. I also like how the characters' backgrounds and motives are clearly painted. This work has great potential. Continue to write and polish it!