Panda_Lord

I don't know why but this chapter made me cry. It was moving.

Are you planning on continuing your pokemon story or have you lost interest?

I feel like elite would have been better

While I am unhappy about some of the world buildings I think this is a good story that I will keep reading but if you haven't already, I commented earlier that it just relies on 'Strong Blood Ties' as mentioned on narutopedia on the 'Mangekyou Sharingan' page so Toshiro could swap eyes with Mei and they could both unlock the Eternal Mangekyou

K im not sure if you have gotten the mangekyou yet but you do know its not just brothers pretty sure, its also family? So your aunt can just switch eyes with you and you'd both have the Eternal Mangekyou.

The chapter dropped while I was reading haha

The image kinda looks like he has yellow eyes, no hate tho loving the story

I think this deserves a 5 because of the amazing writing, the development of the story, the battles, and the cultivation. I think the idea for a Cultivation x Pokemon story is really a really good idea. I think the regression was a really good touch and I like what you have done with the world-building. The current arc is enjoyable and there has not been a single chapter I have not enjoyed.