Marco_Diaz_3728

Could you try to rewrite the story of Galvarosso Scladio adopted son please, he can barely read 2 chapters but for me he has a lot of potential

to see cool fights and interactions between the characters of a story with someone with a little common sense (in some cases) if you want to see crappy generic harem better watch one of the 400 generic animes that come out daily or read any of the others 800 webnovel fanfics where they collect girls as if they were Pokémon, please friend, just leave something for those of us who are not addicted to porn

Author, the story seems to be going very well so far, so I tell you that it would be better if you eliminated the harem category and focused only on the romance with one character because otherwise the story will gradually become more generic until in the end it was only about get the new girl like they were pokemons

specialization, because there are so many broken characters with unfair abilities, why not? All Kakin princes have abilities that already break the scale of power

and you sound like someone in the closet with an ultra religious father who hits his son because his wife left him for another woman 🤨📸🏳️‍🌈 PS: now I'm sure you're not older than 13, don't worry if you talk about the abuse to another adult, it will surely help you

This story could only be written by a 17-year-old boy who was mistreated by his father because he saw him hug one of his friends on his birthday.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

The best option is 2 you could choose the fusion of skills and techniques that could solve the problem of slots making one technique have multiple powers by combining the ability of fire and ice making you gain control of both elements making one technique count for two

I love the idea of ​​the talismans and the mask is just a plus+ I can't wait for the next chapters ...................................................... ......................................................................................................................

The story seems to be pretty good let's see how it unfolds ..................................................................................................................................................................

9 chapters and this already looks amazing I hope you can continue with this author ................................................................................................................................