SouthernPickyEater

I think it is quite obvious

Oh man I am just as sick as you of those. Read too many Madara-fics back to back.

It is but it isn't. First of all he is helping them solve things faster. Second, with monsters attacking he can't afford to have the Madrigals being broken or losing their powers.

Yeah, he can basically use all of those abilities that come with the Speed Force because he already knows he is capable of doing them.

I. Am. Sick. Of. Harems.

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As someone who loves writing, I can only say: First: English isn't my first language, it's Spanish. Second: thank you so much for this review! I am so glad someone took the time to write an actual review rather than a mindless one. I still appreciate them because they help my story anyways, but this? This helps me improve as an author and see where I can change things for the better. Answering your concern with the pacing of the story: It was rather fast in the first chapters because I needed to get this few things out of the way, and, if you really think about it, those four chapters happened in the span of a single day. So while it might feel rushed, you can expect a lot of history to come. As for the lenght, well, I don't have an "ending" planned yet. I do have a lot of events in mind and do remember that this is not just Encanto, but it has different elements mixed in. Where do the monsters come from? What even are they really? Who sent them? Disney has a huge universe I can play with freely, and I will.