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don't waste chapters on useless events cuz there are a lot of chapters you need to cover if u wanna finish even half of this book so just focus on main events and be fast paced. and thanks for the chapter 👍 keep going
thanks for the chapter
but keep it in moderation, cuz if u are gonna compensate him for every opportunity taken from him then it would feel annoying, the way it is currently going is good so far.
TFTC🔥
yang Kai has combat power of a 1st level transcendent at 8th level immortal ascension , and here our mc who took all his opportunity and with his own bloodlines and a broken body cultivation art can't have that power before 3-4 realms before him? u need to keep in check that he can't be weaker than yang kai in the same realm ( ofc not the yang kai in this fic but the real work)
this ch was so good 🔥
just finish it i honestly don't care how small or big u make it , at least there will be one completed fic.
it's good but annoying how u made the mc heal for so long but others can heal in just days and breakthrough at the same time, if you think you are making the mc too strong too quick, don't worry atley for me that's what I want to see and u can just make him act weak if it's required to achieve his goal, but only if the situation is suitable, also he has the best constitution I don't think just anyone should be able to perceive his realm, it should always come with some passive buffs, which can also give him a pass to any secret realm restrictions . Also don't stop I am giving u stones daily for the last 2 days👍, so keep up the good work. And last don't make his dao companions so close to his cultivation he has so much hax and if they can still keep up with him it's just frustrating honestly, i don't care how much more time and energy he needs for his solid foundation bs, keep them 2-3 small realms back now that the realms will have 3 stages. Well it's your fic at the end of the day so just take the one's u see fit if any at all. I will support this work nonetheless 👍
Please don't remove Xue Yue.