lupex034

Some of the paragraphs repeat

thanks for the update

You cant use any sort of logic when reading this or it is miserable to read. great translation though

do you mean the arc or the story itself?

i like it, writing's good, story's good, overall its a good story to read

I will take your word for it, seeing as i cant find what there appearance is

what the heck is with the names

this made me cry inside

Its not bad but it leaves much to be desired when it comes to the mc's appearance as it not lore accurate nor is there a reason for his differing appearance.

I love it